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Your Love

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Literature Text

Your love

Like a whisper
through the wind
echoes within
my very core.

Like a feather
through the breeze
landed on my heart
and took
its instant toll.
Ok this is not good actually but I had this sentence in my head during the day and I wanted to change the pace of the long well defined poetry that I generally write.

So yeah...
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IcarryYour-Heart's avatar
Your comparisons are so delicate.One of my favorites :rose: