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Red Lovers Dawn

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Our relation plummetted
when you came to me
eyes filled with passion
pressed your lips against mine
a disctinct pinch of lust.

Our relation was a pitfall
since the very day
our sick minds connected
and our bodies laid down
battered and bruised.

Our relation took an ill turn
The day when you broke
your promise to never love me
tied me to a chair and
begged me to think carefully.

Our relation was at an end
The day I just said 'no'
when a Red Dawn rose
after out of folly and ordeal
you simply slit your wrists.

Love can be a powerful
tool of self destruction
a rotting of the soul
deadly if shared
by twisted mind like us.

Our relation was at an end
the very same day it began.
Alright so based out of my life experience and a couple of bad relationships which nearly turned the way it does in the poem.

Love can be a very tricky deal when it enters the heart/mind and a twisted soul. I guess it takes that much more rapidly its toll and sometimes makes people act as hopeless as you might imagine. I've witnessed some crazy things done 'in the name of Love' ...
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veiled-eyes's avatar
i forgot to mention. i did read it :meow:
and yeah i know.