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It occurred suddenly
Right before my eyes
You simply withered away
From this earth, gone.

Abundant tears fall
Down my baffled eyes
For I lacked the very time
To wish you a proper goodbye.

You were special to me
A grandmother yet so much more
Someone I looked up to
Someone I truly cared about.

I know you're probably
In a much better place now
Your suffering ended abruptly
And left us selfishly wanting you back.

I will never forget
These moments we shared together
I will never forget
Your memory will last forever.

I will never forget
For you were part of me
I will never forget
You still mean the world to me.

In my deep state of sorrow
I put down those clumsy words
Hoping they will reach you someday
And let you know how I loved you.

You were always hard on me
Yet I always knew you cared
I've done so much to make you proud
Of your grandson, of who  I am.

I will deeply miss you
Tears have not yet dried
For the love I have for you
Has doubled, reignited
This one is special to me. I've been away lately because my grandmother died and I've been in a deep state of sorrow because she meant a real lot to me.

I don't know what much more to say... I miss her so much.
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IcarryYour-Heart Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010
Before I say anything about this poem,I want you to know that I am deeply sorry for your loss,and if it makes you feel any better, I know how you feel because I lost 3 dear people in the same year.I am sure she is in a better place. May her soul rest in peace :rose:

This is quite sad,but beautiful,and filled with emotions.Also,I'm sure she's proud of you :hug:
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ChildrenOfPain Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2010  Student Writer
thanks! I guess everyone's got a different way to react to a loss. I felt the urge to write this when i had a littl time...

Everyone deserves a tribute to their life...
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NeelamChandwani Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2010
simply beautiful
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jneen8 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
I'm so sorry for your loss...
This is a wonderful poem that many can relate to.
I congratulate you on finding the courage and the strength, to write such an emotional poem. Bravo!
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thedon76 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wow. That really touched me. Good job.
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ChildrenOfPain Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2010  Student Writer
Thanks. I appreciate it :)
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HALsurfer Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I couldnīt write to you here how much I like this one.
I clicked on a link much too fast. =o.O=

Well, I wanted to say, that I really feel with you.
My gran also died, like I told you, and I donīt remember much of those last moments because I didnīt had the chance to stay.
I had to work in another city.
It was unsuspected or I would have taken the time off.
But my last visit wasnīt so grand, so I think if I ever get the chance to tell her how much I loved her your words are much more fitting than anything I could ever muster up.

It is so wonderful written.
=^.^=
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ChildrenOfPain Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Student Writer
Well I'm really glad you liked it.

It was kida difficult for me too because this year I had to study a lot because it was a future determining year at the univ so I didn't have much time to actually go and see her.

So I only saw her in her last moments and as i tell here didn't feel like I had the time to say proper goodbye. But life is as it is and I had to accept it so I mustered these 'clumsy' words as i said hoping some would reach her.
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HALsurfer Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CLUMSY????
Where?
This is really great!
Really, you should have more faith in yourself and your work!
:no:
:petting:

I really like your works, as much as read till now.
=^.^=
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ToFu-SouP Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very beautiful... :)
You're very good with words. :D
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